Thoughts:
Arguably one of the most difficult writings to brainstorm, it took me days to figure out the perfect topic to share with the class. The challenge of having to recall an impactful story and the pressure of sharing in front of class only increased the difficulty of this project. Fortunately, I was able to remember a moment in my life which not only was amusing to the audience, but also fulfills the requirements of a credo. This particular account was impactful towards my life, memory, and beliefs.
Link to all Slides and Speaker Notes:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/18Kvs0V99P_B-f4lXqyf5oyH2tqQJ7Mya/view?usp=sharing
Mok, Ho Lam Edwin Writing Block 
Looking at your presentation, I could see that you are really trying to describe your story with details and it is really interesting as the story was really funny. Also I was there when you presented your credo therefore making it a good memory. I think that something to improve on is to put more emphasis on your credo and what you believe as you do not have much, but keep up the good work!
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I thoroughly enjoyed listening to your credo presentation. It was very intriguing and interesting!!! I always eat/drink in the MTR because honestly, I can’t be bothered to care about the rules. One time, at Shek Mun Station, I burst open a pack of Mame Noodles (I used my butt to crush the noddles into pieces). Thankfully, I didn’t get fined, but I did create a huge mess. It was very embarrassing…but I can’t imagine myself being filmed and sent to Mrs. M. Anyways, the pictures and the tone of your voice helped portray your message clearly and efficiently. Overall, it was a great presentation and well organized!
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It is indeed a very interesting credo presentation! I can’t believe you haven’t been funded eating pancakes on the bus. I was finally able to understand why you are late for school sometimes maybe you are just enjoying your breakfast on the bus. Anyways I appreciate you sharing this wonderful and embarking story from your childhood. Keep up the good work bro!
– Eden Kwan
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